Love is something that has been in controversy for a very long time. Some people say they will never fall in love, and how it is unimportant and only a distraction. Others however, say they wont be truly happy until the point they find true love since it is the only thing that matters. These two ideas are shared by many people. I must say that love is actually both. There must be some part of it all that makes people happy. Although at the same time that happiness can be darkness for others. There is no way to actually state if love is a good thing or it Is not. It is all based on experience. I, however, have not yet experienced love in that way. I must admit, I do feel scared to. I have read a lot about what love can do, and what it can cause. There is one thing I am sure of, its not something people can regret happening. First loves are the best since you have no idea what might happen. Even the whole process of being in love can be amazing. This is all very fascinating, but what I will be talking about in the Downfall of Love. When love goes all wrong, and when people have no choice but to let go. The hardest part of it all.
Little girls always want to plan their wedding, and their perfect prince for when they grow up. The thing they are not told, is that love does not always last. Actually, it usually does not. Love can end in a great variety of ways. People can lose interest, people can fall into temptation, people can even move on to what is best. The truth is that no matter the way it ends, someone will end up getting hurt. That is the truth of the matter. I'm not only talking about adult love. Young love is the exact same way, or even maybe worse. Since they have less liberty and have more limitations. Also because they are smitten, and they think it is all rainbows and unicorns. They don't think there are people out there trying to hurt them. This is a big problem with teens. Boys are just looking for one thing, and they are capable of doing anything in order to fool girls into doing it. Love is seriously some tricky business. No one ever knows where it might lead to. People always talk about finding true love. What is it does not exist? Will we ever know? There are all of these stories of heartbroken girls and boys. Yet they still look for love. So I will ask this, why are people so obsessed with love? Will they seriously not be happy until they find it? I guess that is all up to them.
As I have stated, love in not pretty. Maybe I am wrong, and maybe all we need is love. But there is no way to predict how that downfall will end up like. It all depends on the situation. Love can be magical and amazing, but that does not mean that the downfall wont hurt. Because I can promise you that it will. I bet that the world be much better off if love was actually sincere. Of course, that too depends on the person and the situation. If someone can define is love is a good thing, I would love to hear about it.
I really liked your paragraph. Love is ambiguous, you can never know if it is good or bad. It depends on the intentions, and the people involved between a relationship. I personally think that besides all of the pain you feel, love is worth that pain. Nothing feels better than love, if love didn't exist, love for anything, can you imagine how the world would be? No passions for anything, no families, no relationships, no nothing. However I do think your paragraph is exceptional, I really like your way of expressing things Fernanda.
ResponderEliminarThe truth of love in undifined. You are right in all aspects that you post. The innocense and the imagination of love hurts us all. You can be in love wityh the man of your life, your prince , but still whenyou think he'll never hurt you because he says he loves you, it happens someway ort another, jealousy gets in the way or maybe a day when you weren't feeling Ok he'll come up and make you reactin certain way and he'll say somthing agressive but not with the intention you get it with and you'll feel that your "love bond" was broken. The heart break is the hardest of all specially when you realize, he/she has left you for another person. Love lowers our self-esteem and makes us do things that we'll probably regrate. Love, also, makes us exapnd our imagination when people tells us " I THINK I SAW HIM/her AT TEH BEACH WITH SOEMONE ELSE" when really it was his/ her cousin or nothingimpotant. Peole outside the love circle will always try to mnake you fall apart even if they don't want to they are the ones who choose to tell you or not that he was seen with someone else.What this entry says opens opur minds to realize the reality that we forget. We know they'll hurt us but we still belive everything is "RAINBOWS AND FAIRIES".The world lives a,lie and they realize it in the down fall of their firts second third fourth love but still they go back to look for love. In your paragraph you explain clearly the feelintgs and you even added a persona experince. You understand the topic and your ideas are well written in an organised way.
ResponderEliminarThere is really no true about love, it comes and goes. I do agree with you, it may be both good and bad. It may turn your life into a thousand different butterflies or into a gray cloud. Something I DO disagree with you is what you said about boys. They only want ONE thing? I think i am thinking about the same you are thinking.. but still I think you are wrong. Not all men seek for sex, but it is true most men do and want to feel what it is so called PLEASURE. Then come the girls who get fooled because of their lack of thinking. Some girls just do as they are told to do, which would count also as THEIR fault if they get sexually abused. Still, love truly hurts. Million of people seek what it is so called LOVE, but what are they actually looking for? I bet they are looking for someone who can share their hearts with them. Someone who would stay with you in the good and bad times, someone who would never give p upon you. This is the real world and there are no so called "toads that turn into princes" or any wonderful rainbows and unicorns as you mentioned before. I think that love comes with a huge package, and that that package contains both pain and what we have all been seeking for, true love. ☻
ResponderEliminarFer: I enoyed reading your paragraph. It is so interesting and I like all your points of view. Theres no true about love, love only comes and goes. Also I agree when you say that with love can experience happiness, but at the same time you can experience hatred. I also think love is blind. Probably theres a guy who is extremely ugly but you are inlove with his way of being. And you feel extremely inlove with his personality, that you don't know what you like about him. You know his ugly, but you just love the way hes treating you. I agree with you when you say that most guys only want sex. Its true! Many bunch of guys are just jerks who only want that. Maybe you'll think well you are just sterotyping.. Its not true!! everysingle men wants sex! The truth here is that some men demonstrated in different ways. Well Fer, I enjoyed reading your paragraph. Very intresting.
ResponderEliminarFer your essay was great!! I like the way you write. You really put a lot of effort in it. I like all the ways you describe the way you feel. Your perspective of love is what many people like to read. You really did a great job on this essay .In my opinion yours is one of the best essays of all.
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This topic is extremely wide. As you said many people have there own opinions. This is how the world is. I really liked how you wrote so much. It looks like you understand the meaning of love. It has little to few grammar mistakes. I have to say it is the best written essay of all. Good job Fer!
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